PEER RESPONSE

PEER RESPONSE FOR ÁNGELA CAMPOY VALVERDE
BY: ANDREA EGIDOS GARCÍA

Dear Ángela, I'm going to start talking about your topic sentence: I think that it is a good topic sentence because it is the main idea and from this you have written the supporting sentences. In relation to the supporting sentences I think that are good because there is a diversity of arguments. In my opinion the concluding sentence isn't bad because it doesn't  give new ideas, but I think that it isn't too striking. For me a concluding sentence must impact readers. The extension of the text is correct, in that a good paragraph must have approximately among five and ten lines. In general I think you have done a good work! 

DESCRIBE SOMEONE

I want to describe my mother because she is one of the most important people in my life. She is the person who has taken care of me during all my life. She is very funny and I always do a lot of things with her, for example, going shopping, watching series, cooking, etc. We tell the other all our things and problems and she gives me always good advices and helps me a lot. I love how my mum cooks although I'm trying to cook as her. We do delicious cakes, muffins and biscuits, between other things. In short, my mum is the person in whom I trust more because she has never disappointed me.